The site I was asked to review is Royal Tours Africa dot Com. I’m going to go over some SEO, design and monetization points - what’s cool and what can be done better. If you have a website yourself you can probably see if any of the things I cover fit your own website.
E-mail Marketing
In the left sidebar there is a “Montly Updates” box (sidenote: that’s actually a typo - it should be “Monthly”) where people can sign up for a newsletter. That’s very smart - it’s a good idea to collect your visitors’ information so you can contact them (get them to visit the site again, send them special offers or just some tips). But I would give this box more attention. Right now the background is transparent and I don’t think that looks so good - I would make the background white (like in the “Main Menu” box above). I would also list a few benefits - why should people sign up, what can they expect to receive? Also, having something like “I respect your privacy!” or “I will not spam you” should help get more people to sign up - risk removals always help with conversion. Another thing - I would add the optin form to as many pages as possible - not just the front page. Use every opportunity to get a new subscriber - people might not even see the front page first, for example if they come through the search engines.
Link Popularity
When I check the front page of royaltoursafrica.com my Live PageRank add-on tells me that page is only PageRank 1. I would definitely focus on increasing the PageRank. Getting it up to PR3 shouldn’t be that hard - just work on getting more sites to link to Royal Tours Africa - for example through submitting articles, press releases, finding related sites to exchange links, add a resource to the site that people want to link to (aka. linkbait), etc. The PageRank might even increase in the next PageRank update because royaltoursafrica.com is now a featured site on this blog.
One of the key phrases Felista (the owner) is targeting is Kenya safaris. I used SEO Elite to see where royaltoursafrica.com ranked for Kenya safaris: It’s #68 on Google and #7 on MSN (Live Search) - but it’s not in the top 100 on Yahoo. I would focus on ranking high on Google because that’s where the majority of people go when searching for something.
One way to increase your PageRank and increase your rankings in the search engines is through reciprocal links (although it’s not as effective as it used to be). I can see that they have a link directory with a lot of different categories. Although a link is always a link I would reduce the number of categories and try to get links from sites that are related to royaltoursafrica.com - anything related to tourism, travel, Africa, safaris, etc. But I’m not sure how people are supposed to submit their link to this directory - the “Exchange Links Now” link points to addyourlinks.com - this is probably something that needs to be updated.
On-page SEO
The on-page SEO is pretty good. The <title> is “: : Kenya Safaris:Animals in Kenya : Discount Travel : African Safaris” which includes the primary key phrase as well as a few related keywords - which is good. Personally I wouldn’t start the title with “: : ” - but that’s just me ;) There are two h1 tags: “Kenya Safaris” and “Montly Updates” - having your primary key phrase in an h1 tag is one of the oldest tricks in the book and it’s still important.
The images have alt attributes with “Kenya safaris” or other related keywords - which is very good. The keyword density is pretty good. “Kenya” and “safari” is mentioned several times - that should definitely help in ranking for those keywords. On the front page there is a big “headline” that says: “RoyalToursAfrica” — I would split it up into “Royal Tours Africa” so the search engines will recognize each word.
Search engine crawling and navigation
Right now there are 162 pages indexed on Google from royaltoursafrica.com — that’s pretty good, but I don’t know the total number of pages on that domain so maybe there is something that can be done to help Google find the rest of the pages. There is a sitemap which is a good way to help the search engines find the pages on the domain - but that sitemap should perhaps link to more pages.
Having a good navigation also helps the search engine spiders crawl your site. The “Main Menu” looks pretty good - just make sure you’re covering all the main categories/sections of your site. On the front page there are also links to some keyword targeted content pages like Kenya Holidays, Why a Kenya safari, Kenya food, Kenya culture and Shopping in Kenya. Having sub-pages targeted at related long tail keywords is a good idea. The <title> of those sub-pages matches the targeted keyword so that’s also very good. But I think there is something missing on those sub-pages — What should people do next? Often if it’s not obvious where the visitor should go next he’ll just close the browser. Don’t make the visitor have to think - make it clear what you want him to do next. Something at the end of the article, like: Read another article (”Here are some related articles” might help), a link to a form to book a safari tour, etc.
Design
In the right sidebar on the front page there is a “Login Form” - I’m not sure what the purpose of this is. Can visitors sign up to get access to special material? If so, where do people sign up? It’s often a good idea to have the front page (and any other landing pages) as simple as possible - don’t have anything that will only confuse the visitor. It should be clear what you want the visitor to do (sign up for a membership, join the mailing list, visit a particular page, etc.).
I’m a big fan of large fonts - I think it make the page more readable and some people have a hard time reading small fonts. That’s why I think the font size of the body content could be a little bit bigger. Another thing - on the front page there is an “Air Travel Deals to Kenya” column with links to a few airlines that fly to Kenya. That’s a good idea - nice to provide this kind of a resource. But I would put it on a separate page and not on the front page - you don’t want to lose your visitor as soon as he arrives on your site. At least add target="_blank" to the links so they open in a new window ;)
Monetization
At the bottom of the front page there is a PayPal banner with an affiliate link - I don’t think that’s the best choice if they’re interested in earning a little bit more through affiliate marketing. I would find an offer that’s more suitable to the visitors of this site - something related to traveling, tourism, etc. Just search through the affiliate networks - like ClickBank (search the CBmall), Commission Junction, etc.
Other methods of monetization could be for example Google AdSense, selling links, CPM banners, optin co-registration, getting resale rights for eBooks related to travel and selling them on the site, etc… But I think affiliate marketing could be the best move. Although… it all depends on the focus of the site - how much is each visitor worth? Do you want to keep the visitor on the site as long as you can or are you willing to sell a click away from your site for a few cents/dollars?
Well, what did you think of this review? Anything else that I should have covered? Anything you want explained further or covered in more detail?
Do you want me to review your site/product/service? Let me know - we can probably work something out :)
Keywords: pagerank, website review, email marketing, optin, linkbait, landing pages, monetization, web design, search engines, key phrase, link popularity, alt tag, spiders, cpm, long tail, conversion, reciprocal links, resale rights



8 responses so far ↓
felista // Oct 8, 2007 at 5:56 am
Hey Hannes,
This is the most comprehensive review I have got thanks a lot. I had not even noticed the typo you can be sure that has since been rectified. I shall be implementing the suggestions soon. I do have a Google adsense account and there was a banner on the site early last month but i removed it. Will reconsider it later on after a few improvements.
Hannes Johnson // Oct 8, 2007 at 8:35 pm
I’m glad you liked it Felista. I wanted to do a thorough review - but as you can see it took some time :)
Appfunds // Oct 21, 2007 at 10:02 pm
It`s interesting to see you have less rss readers than me on my Polish blog and you are in top hundred.
I hope you make more money than me :)
Hannes Johnson // Oct 25, 2007 at 12:58 am
@Appfunds: Well, a big reason for why I made it to the Top 100 most favorited blog is that I was included in the original Technorati link train.
felista // Nov 9, 2007 at 3:52 am
After winning this contest and getting my site reviewed I made some changes to the site. There has been an improvement on the Google page rank to 2. Likewise it has also improved and is currently ranked at no 38 this is exciting as this site has been only been up since February 2007. I still have not worked on the landing page but with time I shall get to that. I believe being featured on this site and the link exchange programme have played a huge role on this.
Hannes Johnson // Nov 9, 2007 at 10:37 pm
@felista: I’m glad that you benefited from the review :) - Yeah, getting a link from a PageRank 4 page usually helps increase your PR.
Just keep optimizing your website and work on steadily building more links.
Thanks for the follow-up. Great to hear how it worked out. But you should also pat yourself on the back for taking action and making the changes I suggested - some people might not have done anything. But if you keep doing what you’ve always been doing you’ll most likely keep getting the same results you’ve always been getting.
SEOContest2008 // Feb 6, 2008 at 2:31 pm
WOW Hannes, I was browsing through your old posts and found this one. Its a very detailed analysis that you’ve done for the website!
Work At Home Ideas // Apr 6, 2008 at 4:36 pm
Hi Hannes,
That’s a great review you did and I picked up a few useful tips too. You’re right about the importance of getting high PR links to increase your blog PR. I have experienced it for my new blog too. Somehow for me, it seems to be more true for my blog than for my website.
Peter Lee
Work From Home Business Blog
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